Wednesday, April 30, 2014

Writing Yourself Into a Corner

And Loose Plot Threads (Featuring: The Crystal Witch. Coming Soon(ish)!)

This is different from Writer's Block, though it often does cause Writer's Block. Writing yourself into a corner means you can't really get from Point A to Point B in the narrative. You've written yourself into a corner, but you don't want to chop out what you've done because it's required to happen later on into the story.

Right now I'm deep in the writing of The Crystal Witch, so I am currently dealing with plenty of these challenges myself. Note that I say challenges and not problems. Problems are things you need to fix in order for them to go away, a challenge is something you face in order to make yourself (and, as a writer, your story) better for it.

Because of the way I write (all over the place shotgunning narrative like a maniac and mostly making it up as I go rather than planning it all out with a cork board and string like logical, sane people) I end up with this a lot. As a result I have gotten pretty good a figuring them out without it feeling like a totally convenient deus ex machina.

In The Crystal Witch, Gareth (the main character) breaks his swords in battle because they're cheap practice blades. Later on I found myself scratching the top of my head because he's having to fight several times. Initially it creates tension: how in the world is a swordsman going to fight without a sword? This also creates the opportunity to show how smart he can be (by making do without a sword and using something else as a makeshift weapon). Eventually, however, it's going to become inconvenient, and he's going to need a sword. Problem is, how is he going to get one considering the circumstances he's in?

Another example:

I love action, but I also like a dose of realism. I like things to be gritty and maybe even a little depressing. When my hero gets into a fight there is blood, vomit, and a building burning down.

Thanks to Jim Butcher I am pretty much required to make something burn in each of my stories.
This battle wasn't easy and, as part of the "show don't tell" part of writing, I show it in his clothing. Problem was, after that, he had a long journey ahead of him that was in between places that would allow him a change of clothes. Now, I have written myself into a corner where he is forced to either continue wearing those clothes (which, with my "dose of realism" mentality, would begin to stink), or go naked.

Oops.

To solve this I had to take a tiny step backwards so that the building wasn't completely obliterated in the fire, just the part where the battle occurred. This left other parts of the building untouched and, thus, salvageable. Thus, a change of clothes!

Loose plot threads are a little like moments where you write yourself into a corner, but you don't realize it.

A big part of The Crystal Witch revolves around an academy where witch-hunters are trained. In one scene it's mentioned that one of the students, Drake, had a grandmother who was a witch, giving him strange abilities he uses to help hunt witches. In another scene it's mentioned that Gareth was nearly kicked out of the academy because he might have been the son of a witch.

So...is the academy pro-witch background or anti-witch background?

These two clashing scenes could have easily slipped right past me. Luckily they were close together and I wrote down a note to remind myself to fix it in the edit process (I don't edit when I'm in the writing process unless there's something horribly out of place). However, had they been on opposite ends of the story, I might not have even noticed them at all.

However, a fresh pair of eyes (ie: not yours) is more likely to catch it.

Sometimes, however, they don't. This leads you to publishing the story with a plot thread dangling.

Let's pick on Dusted, shall we?

After the scene at Walmart, when they are attacked by faeries, I originally just had them get away, leaving the faeries at the parking lot and getting home safely. This, however, left open the possibility for a "car driving down the road during a battle" scene, so I expanded upon it. This left me with the car being ruined, and that gets fixed as well. They repair the windows and remove the werewolf blood from the seat, which is then given to Crystal.

...Hey, did you guys ever notice when the werewolf blood gets mentioned again? Because I sure didn't, and I wrote the thing.

However, Dusted was meant to be read as a standalone story, with only the possibility of expanding upon it. Crystal does decide right then and there that she's going to throw it away, however...

...Did I mention one of the reason I like Jim Butcher's writing is because he has Checkhov's Guns that span entire books?

Yes, I wasn't planning in doing that originally (oops!), but causing a very minor, loose plot thread to dangle also gave me an "Ah hah!" moment for the future.

These are two examples that you get to learn as you go. You likely won't notice them when you first begin writing. As time goes on, however, you catch and correct them. As more time goes on you instead leave them alone for the most part, stroke your author's beard, and decide how you can make your mistake into something awesome.

Even female authors are required to have beards.

Sunday, April 20, 2014

I've Been Living a Lie

I have to admit, this guy makes a pretty good argument.

So where do I live if Idaho doesn't exist? Probably Skyrim.

This goes on in my back yard at least once a month.

Thursday, April 10, 2014

A Trend That Needs to Stop

I like book covers, it's like a little slice of the story made into a good visual. I am particularly in love with the Italian edition of Moira Young's Blood Red Road. If I could have this as a poster hanging in my bedroom, I would.


But there is a trend in book covers, YA books in particular that needs to stop.

I am talking about the Half of a Face cover (which I will now acronym into HOAF, which sounds like a sound effect for being punched in the stomach.)


I'm not talking about a whole face, either. There are lots of whole faces on book covers, and those, with a few exceptions, are rather uninspired, but the Half of a Face is definitely a theme I'm getting pretty sick of. Maybe all of our super-gorgeous models these days are disciples of some secret order of Harvey Dent we don't know about? Don't know what I'm talking about? Let me show you some examples of covers just from going through the books on my shelf. We have...

Uglies, by Scott Westerfield:


This the older (and way less creepy) cover. It technically wraps around the book, where there is a whole face, although if they had made the whole face the cover I think it would have looked much better.


The whole series is at fault for following the HOAF theme, actually.

If there's an odd number of eyeballs on your covers, something is wrong.

The Forest of Hands and Teeth by Carrie Ryan:


I actually like this cover, but it kind of distracts me that the girl would be wearing eyeliner during a zombie apocalypse. Now, it's believable that a girl would wear some during a recent outbreak, but to give you a time frame for how long zombies have been roaming, the quest of the main character is to find the ocean, which no one in her village thinks is real. It would have to be several generations into the zombie apocalypse, eyeliner being the least of people's problems.

Vampire Academy, by Richelle Mead:


Mostly it's the first one, and I definitely prefer these covers over the new ones, which are faded out versions of these with a giant VA slapped over the top of them...except for the 6th, which is further zoomed in to create the HOAF look.

Trickster's Choice by Tamora Pierce:


Tamora Pierce is a prominent author of my childhood and none of her other books have HOAF as far as I'm aware of.

Delirium by Lauren Oliver:

(Pic refused to work right, so I removed it.)

What is it with girls hiding in the woods? First Uglies, then Forest of Hands and Teeth, now Delirium? I picked this book up about a week ago at a thrift store for a buck, and is the only one listed here I haven't read yet. It sounded dystopian, which drew my interest since the second book has been out, but it also sounds romancey, which made me cringe. It's another of those books that makes me afraid to read it because I've been disappointed so many times since the Twilight craze started.

For comparison, here's the cover's whole face:




I'm not the only person who's noticed this (thank heavens, I'm not crazy) as this gal has pointed out this trend, as well as many more.